Sunday, April 20, 2014

story number 2


I didn't want one post to be super long, so here is the second story I was talking about! =)

Enjoy!

                                                     Inner Tube
A man slips into a swimming pool unnoticed and moves towards a woman floating on an inner tube in the deep end. They were the only two in the pool and this was finally his chance. He had been watching her for weeks now and he was obsessed with her. So obsessed that he knew he had to kill her. His balcony overlooked the pool and every night she was there, sitting on her inner tube, a cigarette dangling from her hand, the ashes falling into the cool water. She was beautiful, no doubt, but that wasn’t what he noticed about her. He noticed her because she didn’t notice him. Every night he watched her, his own cigarette the only light on his balcony and she never saw him. She was oblivious to every thing around her, her main focus the water. He stopped swimming and just stared. He had never been this close to her before and he could smell her cigarette. He savored in that smell, realizing that they smoked the same brand. Maybe they could be friends. He shook his head violently, getting the thought out. No one was ever his friend. No one ever liked him and no one ever would, just like his dad had told him so many times when he was young.
The young girl suddenly gasps and he comes back from his thoughts about his childhood and sees that she finally actually notices him; he had taken too long.  “Oh… hello… I didn’t know anyone else enjoyed the pool as much as I did.” Her voice came out just like he thought it would, low and sultry. The kind of voice anyone would want to talk to.
“Oh… well maybe not as much as you, but I like a dip every now and then.” He smiles at her and she seems to cringe away from it. His smile falters. He had smiled too big and scared her. He had to be careful if he was still going to get his chance tonight.
“Well… it’s good to meet a neighbor finally. I have been here for a couple of weeks now and haven’t really met anyone yet. Work keeps me so busy that I normally…” She rattles on, sounding nervous. He realizes that he is still smiling. He loses the smile and continues to nod, though his thoughts are on how he is going to kill her and not what she is saying. He always wondered why people rambled when they were nervous. Maybe they thought to annoy the other person into leaving them alone. His thoughts went back to his dad. He knew his dad would be proud of him for this one. His dad was always proud when he brought a girl home, but this one… this one was beautiful. They were usually plain girls that no one noticed, just like no one noticed him, but now he was going to get a beauty. His dad told him he would never get a beautiful girl. This will show him. He came back to the present abruptly; she gave him a strange look and was starting to swim away. His smile must have returned.
“I… uh… I am just going to stay in the deep end over there. I won’t bother you with my talk anymore. Have a nice night.” That was her polite but hasty way in saying goodbye to him. He stayed where he was and watched her float away, the smoke creating a design in the sky. He swam in the opposite direction, making his way to the shallow end and keeping his distance, making her think she was safe. He knew they could never be friends. Someone like her would never be friends with someone like him. He turned around to watch her again but jumps when he sees she is gone. Even her inner tube is gone, no longer floating in the deep end. He hadn’t even heard her get out of the pool. He looks around but doesn’t see her anywhere, he doesn’t\’t even see the light from her cigarette. “Well… there goes my chance. I will have to wait for another night.” Since he was already there, he decides he may as well enjoy some time in the spa.
He steps into the spa, immediately enjoying the hot water. He submerges his whole body, the water covering everything up to his chin. The jets are on full blast and he forgets everything else around him. His mind starts to wander; back to the first girl he brought home to his dad. His dad had been so proud that he had wanted to continue the family business. “Look dad! My first girl!” He had found her wondering the street, lost, and he had offered to help. At that time, he had been able to better hide his smile and she had not suspected anything. He had brought her back to his house, offering his phone so she could call a cab. As she was on the phone, he had picked up the first tool he could find, a screwdriver. When she had turned around to ask him for his address, he had stabbed her in the eye. The red that came pouring out of her eye was gorgeous. So gorgeous that he had dreamed about it and knew he could never stop.
His reverie is so deep and the jets so loud that he doesn’t hear her walk up behind him. His focus is on his thoughts and the smile is back on his face. The smile remains even as the cold rubber of the deflated inner tube is placed around his neck. The smile remains as she slowly tightens the inner tube around his neck and starts to squeeze. The smile remains as the life slowly leaves him. He doesn’t even struggle and his last thought is, “Dad is going to be so disappointed.”
She keeps the inner tube tight for a long time, making sure it’s over.
“When you want to kill someone, you should really do it before they notice you.” She says to him out loud, her face in a grimace as she notices the smile on his face. “God you are creepy… but handsome… mom is going to be so proud of me when I bring you home…” 

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